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Je voudrais de l'aide svp svp !! ,je voudrais savoir si mon texte qui parle de mes habitudes alimentaires et de mon sport est correcte(orthographe ,grammaire ,verbe .....) svp c'est pour demain !!Merci
I think my diet is  balanced, because I eat everything: fish, meat, vegetables, fruits, dairy products, etc. ... I always make five meals. For my breakfast, I drink a glass of orange juice with lemon, then I eat toast with chocolate and  i drink a glass of milk For lunch I eat a salad, a  meat or a fish and  fruits. I do not like vegetables but I should   often  eat him because it's good for my bodyFor a snack I often eat a cupcake and a cup of milk. And dinner I eat a light meal and milk products with my family. I love pasta, potatoes, pizza, fish, meat, eggs, fruits,cakes ... I do not like broccolis and artichokes my mother is a very good cook! with she we make ​​a lot of sport, we run 1 time a week and we make sports exercises at home. with my class , we make  rugby , i like this sport!

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  • I think my diet is balanced, because I eat everything: fish, meat, vegetables, fruits, dairy products, etc. ... I always make five meals. For my breakfast, I drink a glass of orange juice with lemon, then I eat a toast with chocolate and i drink a glass of milk For lunch. I eat a salad, a  meat or a fish and  fruits. I don't like vegetables but I should  often  eat him because it's good for my body. For a snack I often eat a cupcake and a cup of milk. And for the Dinner I eat a light meal and milk products with my family. I love pasta, potatoes, pizza, fish, meat, eggs, fruits,cakes ... I don't like broccolis and artichokes. My mother is a very good cook! with her we make ​​a lot of sport, we run 1 time a week and we make sports, exercises at home. with my class , we played rugby , i like this sport!

    Sinon, je ne vois pas de fautes, bonne journée ! :)
  • ça me semble bien juste

     le chiffre 1 à mettre en lettre

    I do not like vegetables ---> tu peux mettre la forme contracté plutot : I don't like

    attention par contre faire du sport c'est le verbe "do" non pas make
    et faire du rugby on dit play rugby

    aussi qaund tu dis que tu aimes les pates les pizzas les oeufs .... soit tu mets tous au pluriel soit tous au singulié

    voila sinon c'est du bon travail

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